Feedback of class presentation

Feedback- Film noir opening scene presentation

Our group's film genre that we presented was film noir Hardboiled and gangster: 

• Our main concept was favoured by all in the class, so we sticking to our original ideas with no changes to the plot. 

• We wanted to incorporate film noir slang into the title as we were stuck on names, also it would have embodied the genre further by conforming to the film noir genre.
• The class collectively gave their feedback and the unanimous decision had fallen on 'Harlem sunset' meaning a fatale injury caused by a weapon like a knife, and as a group we decided to go with this.

• Feedback on our storyboard was generally positive, we were told it was well drawn and clearly labelled by Zayanah. 

Location: 

The location for the filming, and picture shooting will take place in round Xena's grandmother's house and garage, and in the alley near the house.  Though at the time we had no footage of inside the house or garage, we do now and we've agreed that it is a suitable location. 

Evaluation:

The general feedback were positive and the only issue was the absence of a title, the audience had voted for 'Harlem Sunset' as the title of our media project, we had taken this into consideration and decided that we would use this title.