Showing posts with label script writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label script writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 21 January 2016

Harlem Sunset voice-over Script

Voice-over of Scarlett "Harlem Sunset" practical

 
Once we had the majority of the continuous editing was done, I got a sense of  how long the script had to be in order to fit in the last part of the final production of 'Harlem Sunset'.
 
 
 
Whilst writing I realised I couldn't write all the script all together in one block, as I needed certain parts to be isolated in order for it to be edited in to correspond with what is happening in the frame; during the "where's the money" as this is what another actor is saying on screen.    
 

Film Noir slang

  • Snooper: detective or private detective 
  • Kick: Complaint
  • bracelets: Handcuffs


I wanted the script to contain film noir slang in, however I felt that too much would make it less natural so I stuck with only three so there is continuity in the use of film noir slang (as shown in previous script).  

Evaluation

The writing itself was easy as it fits the general narrative of the second half of the film opening, however I may have written too much, but if this is the case I can cut bits out if the sound track is too long. Though doing four different recordings could make the editing process easier as we can easily remove bits we don't need and re-order them, thus improving the continuity of our film opening.  




Sunday, 6 December 2015

Practical task- Script writing

Harlem Sunset- tape recorder message

In order to create a script that would be accurate for my genre I looked at film noir slang examples to see how they're used. 

I got this from the web-address of https://www.miskatonic.org/slang.html 




I then looked at this clip from the official 'Hotel noir on how to speak noir' to get an idea of accents.
 
List of film noir slang that I will use:
  • Snooper- detective
  • doll- woman 
  • ice- diamonds 
  • cop- police 
  • Canary- singer
  • trap- mouth 
  • trigger man-person who's purpose is to use a gun
  • roscoe- gun 
  • swallow bullets- to be shot through the mouth
  • mazuma- money
The Finished script:  
 

Evaluation:

I have used the appropriate slang in order to make this conform to the film noir genre.
However, we haven't found an actor/actress to say this with the accent in order for it to work. Though we have a few friends willing to take part already.