Audience Feedback Improvements for final draft of film opening

Peer Feedback Comments

During a peer assessment of our film opening, we received an assortment comments, however the general feedback was very similar but I looked through to identify the improvements we could make. 

This group stood out for me as they brought forward the most concern and points of improvements. Though we can't go back and re-film or replace the cassette for them, we can amend the sound gap in final cut pro. This particular issue can be fixed by going back and looking through sound clips and seeing where this gap is, next the gap could be filled with the appropriate non-diegetic music.Though we must be mindful of that fact that altering the sound may diminish the dramatic effect of the loud 'boom' sound at the end, however this is a valid improvement that should be considered if the silence seemed out of place.          

 



 The improvements from this group were more doable than the ones from the last group, as I could adjust the exposure of light in the frame during this scene. Though many some groups had found it easier to tell that it was money in the scene than others. 

Overall feedback 

• Sound gap needs to be filled as it seems odd
• lighting and exposure on the money scene